I’m running this in its entirety from Bill Quick’s Daily Pundit. Because it’s so good. I didn’t even ask if I could. He won’t mind. Neither will razorbacker.
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He stepped out of the soup kitchen, packed as always on bitterly cold nights with the soup watered to the point of absolute clarity, and the wind hit him like a knife blade.
His mother had been right; he never listened. His coach had been right; he never gave his all. His high school guidance councilor had been right; so much potential, so little effort. His ex mother-in-law had been right; he’d never amount to anything. At last able to see himself for what he was, a loser, he turned upwind to head for the mission bed for the night.
The howling wind blew debris into his face, including a small slip of paper. He reached up and dully examined it. A lottery ticket. For tonight’s drawing. He slipped it into his pocket…maybe this time. Maybe this time.
If this were the opening to a novel or short story, would you keep reading? I know I would.
Not bad, razorbacker. Not bad at all.